Before primary school ,l had two dreams,the one is that one day i can become a Chinese teacher,another one is that in th

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Before primary school ,l had two dreams,the one is that one day i can become a Chinese teacher,another one is that in the future can be up to a writer.这段话有错误吗?

有in the future 应该放在最后面,因为是时间状语,如果想表未来可以用will就行,但你的是过去的只能有过去式would.望能帮你忙
望采纳,谢谢这个好像没有关系吧。就像这两句话:in the future i want to be a writer. 与I want to be a writer in the future.同学in the future是时间状语,通常用在最后,起修饰哦。知道就好,长知识就好,望采纳谢谢