自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!
自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!
on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.
on the hand,people think that the internet can increase of efficiency in study and work.because of it's very convenient.moreover,rich of resoures make people efficiency.on the other hand,because,the young man indulge in the internet's game.so people think that may influeace of learning.
in my opinion,with develop of society.the internet will be importance to daily life of people.young man should use of resonable the internet and on the way of used work and study more than play a internet's game.
第一句看上去就像机器翻译一样.是手写的么.是啊，外语水平不高，有些个别短语是百度的！With today's rapid development, internet has become the tool for people's needs. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, people think that internet can increase the efficiency in study and work as it is very convenient and has rich resources. On the other hand, people easily indulge themselves in online games which may influence study and break daily schedules.
In my opinion, internet will be more important to people's daily life with the development of our society. However, young people should use resourceful interenet to work and study rather than just gaming.
尽量保留了你的原意。只对语法作了调整。供参考，希望能帮到你！我还是想知道你这语法是怎么调整的。我对语法完全不懂 不知道怎么组成一句话！OF 和 FOR 后边接什么我都不懂什么时候该用他们- -这个太长了。而且是很基础的语法。你可以网上查介词of 和for的具体用法，很详细。对于初学来说就写这样的文章有点难了。而且很多时候语序和中文是不一样的，不能以中文的逻辑去造句。这个需要多读英语去掌握他们约定俗成的表达。