这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完
这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完
she was silent,and she had a smile on her face.the other girl on her right said:"we didn't like the windows open,did you have idea?we made you close to windows,you must close them.you had a big mouse.why were your words so much?you close your mouse.i didn't think of you say." .i thought of she is a bad student,i was silent,i didn't like speaking to her.waited a moment,i wanted to drink.some water fell down the ground when i drink.the girl said:"my foot had some water." then she threw a bottle to
she was silent,and she had a smile on her face.the girl on her right said:"we DON'T like the windows open.DO you have ANY idea?IF we WANT you close THE windows,you must close them.you HAVE a TALKATIVE mouse.WHY DO YOU TALK so much?JUST SHUT UP.i DON'T WANT TO HEAR you say ANYTHING ." i thought she WAS A SORT OF bad student,SO i KEPT silent,i didn't like speaking to her.A moment LATER ,i wanted to drink.some water fell off to the ground WHILE I WAS DRINKING.the girl said:"my foot IS WET WITH THE water." then she threw a bottle to ME,