初二英语作文 帮我改下语法

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初二英语作文 帮我改下语法
Our feelings are changing all the time.Many things around us my affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.
someone may dislike rainy,but i don't dislike ti.When it rains,the air will be fresher,and behind it,it may be have a rain bow hang in the sky,how beautiful!AO i like rainy.I also like sunny.The sun shine brightly may make me happy,and the dark in my dark may leave,ang i may study or work better.I don't like windy ,because in windy,many things will affected,such as if the net line broke in windy ,then they can't mend it because of strong wind.So i don't like windy.
That;s the reason whhy weather affect my feelings.Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with me?
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Our feelings are changing all the time. Many things around us affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect us the most.Someone may dislike the rain,...