改一句英语病句For then ,there is plenty of water in the nature can be used ,such as rain water ,river water,well water and so on.
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改一句英语病句
For then ,there is plenty of water in the nature can be used ,such as rain water ,river water,well water and so on.
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您可以在plenty之前加a,因为plenty of 接可数复数。a plenty of 可以加复或不可数。
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such as (比如)， 和 and so on (等等)， 同时出现在一个句子里，意思重复了。用一个就好。
For then, there is plenty of water in the nature can be used, such as rain water, river water, and well water.
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nature后面加上that或which，,there is plenty of water in the nature是主句，can be used 是定语从句，从句缺少关系代词，加上后才完整，整句翻译:自然界有大量可以利用的水
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nature后面要有个定语从句的引导词that，因为这个that在从句中作主语，所以不能省略
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For then ,there is plenty of water in the nature (that) can be used ,such as rain water ,river water,well water and so on.