If you want to consider going to Hainan.It will be a great trip.这句话有问题么

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If you want to consider going to Hainan.It will be a great trip.这句话有问题么

有问题 首先第一句就不是完整句 If you want to consider going to Hainan.“”这是从句没主句“” 如果你吧句号改成逗号 后面那句It will be a great trip做主句那你要保证主句和从句“”主语一致“” 而不是一个主语是you 另外一个是it
你这句很别扭 如果你偏要这么说 正确的事if you want to consider going to Hainan,you will have a great trip
更推荐这样 going to Hainan for vacation will be a great trip
楼上的那个推荐答案错的不比你好多少不是完整句 want也用错了 看哥的 得永生觉得好鼓励一下