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You leave me a good impression,
but so sorry that i cannot be your girlfriend even you want to give me an expensive present...
If you did not married once,maybe I will accept you and ignore 10 years’ gap.

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You have left (leave) me a good impression,
but so sorry,(that) I (i) cannot be your girlfriend even though (even) you want to give me an expensive present...
If you did not marry (married) once,maybe I would (will) accept you and ignore a ten year age (10 years〉) gap.