请帮我改下英语作文My Net Pal's name is Tony .He is a fifteen-year-old American.He likes to play baseball but he can't play it well.He also likes action movies and ofen goes to see it ,and his favorite actor is LiXiaolong.Tony wants to go to China Beijing to see The Great Well.On Septemember 11st——his birthday ,I sent a photo of Beijing to him.He felt very happy
请帮我改下英语作文
My Net Pal's name is Tony .He is a fifteen-year-old American.
He likes to play baseball but he can't play it well.He also likes action movies and ofen goes to see it ,and his favorite actor is LiXiaolong.Tony wants to go to China Beijing to see The Great Well.
On Septemember 11st——his birthday ,I sent a photo of Beijing to him.He felt very happy
ofen应该是often,
???楼主好像没放文啊？
My Net Pal's name is Tony who is an fifteen-year-old American boy.He likes to play baseball though he can't play it well.He also likes to watch the action movies,and his favorite actor is Burce Lee.To...
My Net Pal's name is Tony who is an American of fifteen-year-old.
He likes to play baseball though he can't play it well.He also likes to see the action movies, and the favorite actor of him is LiXiaolong.Tony wants to go to China Beijing to see The Great Wall.
On Septemember 11th, his birthday ,I sent a photo of Beijing to him, he felt very happy 。
做了一点小调整，希望对楼主有帮助~O(∩_∩)O~