我想问下这句英语有病句吗?

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我想问下这句英语有病句吗?
I'd like to talk with you together in Provence for the rest of our life!
或者说:我想与你一起在Provence共度余生,该怎么翻译?
I'd like to talk with you together in Provence for the rest of our life!
I'd like to talk with you together in Provence for the rest of my life!
是rest of my life还是rest our life?

翻译成I wish to live with you in Provence for the rest of my life比较好
rest of my life 比较好 因为一般来说这句话的含义是你希望你的余生和她共度,所以the rest of my life 比较合理