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Some people think earlier technology changed our lives more than recent technology. Do you agree or disagree?
Technology is playing an imperative role in our lives which promotes the development of society. Colourful life in present age benefit from sustainable technology and earlier innovations really made our lives had more signifigent changes than recent innovations.
Acient society, people had no vehicles and only on foot,had boring leisure activities and with no electrical equipment until the earlier technology sprangout, take computers for example, modern life cannot live without computers. Prevalent computers make people more convenient, which cause us do almost everything at home. Earlier technology improved essential life in terms of food, clothing, housing and transportation and changed backward life into a new age. By contrast, new technology is too advanced and cost too much money that average families can not afford it. Most hi-tech are invented for scientific activities rather than daily life. Eavlier technology such as mobile phones, cars, internet etc, which are satisfield by people in current life and really brought great changes.
Recent, technology may put in use in future life and give more changes as society is sustainable developing. However, all the new technology is based on earlier technology we should not only forget the earlier technology but also remember the contribution of it.
In sum. Technology really change life a lot regarless of earlier or recent. Though earlier is more practical. As a result of it, early society was transformed more than current society. Goveronment should let scientfic authorities research more practical technology and put them in use in daily life. Our society will breakthrough and step into a new page.