这句句子有语法错误么?

问题描述:

这句句子有语法错误么?
I enjoy every time when i am listening to 《stay in love you》I think i worth hearing a hundred times

你好.
你的句子有几个错(句子结构和措辞);

其实这个句子有两部分 –表达两个概念:
1.
I enjoy it every time I listen to 《stay in love you》

I enjoy it whenever I listen to 《stay in love you》

2.
I think it’s worth hearing a hundred times

可以分为两个句子写,
若写为一个句子,用 and连起来:

I enjoy it whenever I listen to 《stay in love you》. I think it’s worth hearing a hundred times

I enjoy it whenever I listen to 《stay in love you》and I think it’s worth hearing a hundred times

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