这句话错在哪里?应该如何改?
问题描述：
这句话错在哪里?应该如何改?
Help cultivate children’s independence,self-determination and develop a strong sense of responsibility and thus they will be more confident,independent and worldly wise.
答
Helping to cultivate children's independence,self determination and devloping a strong sense of responsibility and thus they will be more confident,independent and worldly wise