求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.
求英语大神帮我检查下这篇作文的语法.
If one day I have a chance to be a color,I
would like to be green.Maybe someone would ask,why green?That primarily
because the green represent hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and spring
comes back to awaken the life on earth,the tree on the hill were just leafing
out,the leaves were green with vigor and glory.The grasses grew again like a
blanket,the grasses were green.Nature wakes in spring.Everyone smiled when
they passed forest,because they saw green,it means spring comes again,hope
comes again.And if I was green,I will cheer that people would pleasant when
they saw me.What’s more green also represent peace and happy,I have been read
bible when I was young,and one of the story is very impress me.In the great
flood,bird brought olive branch,the olive branch is green.
最好是直接改好的
If one day I have a chance to be a color,I
would like to be green.Maybe someone would ask why?That's primarily
because the green represents hope.When the chilly winter is gone,and spring
comes back to awaken the lives on earth,the trees on the hill start to burgeone out
,the leaves are green with vigor and glory.The grasses grow up like a
blanket again,the grasses are green.Nature wakes up in spring.Everyone smiles when
he passes through the forest,because they see the color of green,which means spring comes again and hope
comes again.And if I were green,I would be cheerful for people being pleasant to see
me.What’s more,green also represents peace and happiness,I have read
Bible when I was young,and one of the stories impressed me.during the great
flood,a bird brought the olive branch,and the olive branch is also green.
改了一些时态,用词,和句型.同学你参考一下吧.