帮忙看下这个句子有问题么
问题描述：
帮忙看下这个句子有问题么
we access for database of employees info for business and access fordatabase of available positions for people who looking for work
通顺么
答
access是及物动词,后面不需要加for吧,available应该放在名词后面,简单改为
we access database of employees info for business and access database of positions available for people who are looking for work