短文改错.as the popularity of online shops,a new profession has been appeared on the internet ,which is called internet mode
短文改错.as the popularity of online shops,a new profession has been appeared on the internet ,which is called internet models ,internet models are employed by the salesperson of online shops ,in this way ,customers who wants to buy things online can know more about which they intend to buy ,they can choose from the most suittable clothes ,and internet modle are popular by young people,some student earn money modle in their spare time ,they can gain work experience that may be useful for them after graduation ,therefore ,they want to wear beautiful clothes to show their beautiful to others .
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(With) the popularity of online shops,a new profession has (去掉been) appeared on the internet,which is called internet models,internet models are employed by the (salespersons) of online shops,in this way,customers who (want) to buy things online can know more about (what) they intend to buy,they can choose from the most suitable clothes ,and internet (modle s) are popular (with/among) young people,some (students) earn money (漏打字了吧?) modle in their spare time ,they can gain work experience that may be useful (to) them after graduation,(Besides),they want to wear beautiful clothes to show their (beauty) to others .