求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.

求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.
1.First of all,getting good education,people can obtain more opportunities in the future easily.It means people can obtain higher paying and respected careers with a good education.Professionals who make high salaries are those who have excelled in their basic educational skills.Second,getting excellent education means they may have more relative knowledge and information in their major than those who didn't get it.Although there are several benefits to a good education,the main benefit is that it makes one a better person in all aspects of their life.They can serve well for our modern society.
2.While people are running toward one’s goals,they may meet with many obstacles in his life.I also have such experiments.2 years ago,my best object is going aboard to study Chinese.At that time,the economic condition was the biggest obstacle at me.Everybody knows that an overseas living need a large sum of money,however,my family couldn’t perfectly afford it.So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china.And,fortunately,I was selected from the many applications who hope to go to ㅁㅁ university in exchange.At last,I could be reached my goals