英语高手帮看看有没有语病

问题描述:

英语高手帮看看有没有语病
1;There are many girls I havn't chance to love.
2;God,please tell me how many girls I havn't chance to love at all.
有语病的话帮忙改正一下.

There are many girls I didn't stand any chance to love.
God, please tell me how many girls I've got no chance to love after all.