求高手批改英语作文
求高手批改英语作文
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Should We Help Strangers
When i was a child ,my parent told me that helping strangers is our traditional virtue.
In this new era,things seems to be more complicated than before.Many people became not believing that faith any more .One day,i was so astonished when i heared that a boy was sued by and old laddy's daughter for his kindhearted.The boy helped the old ladddy when he saw a dog was attacting she.This kind of things happened every day on the world.The good guy helping strangers been asked to take the responsbility if the victim can't find the real wrecker.
In my opinion,we need to think about how to protect ourselves when we intend to help strangers.
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