求一篇英语作文~高中水平,各项错误要低于5个!拜托了~~

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求一篇英语作文~高中水平,各项错误要低于5个!拜托了~~
假如你是李华,住在北京市南城.你的澳大利亚笔友Bob来信谈到他的居住地情况,并希望了解你所居住地的情况,请你用英语写一封回信.回信必须包括以下内容:
自然情况:
1.位于北京南城,毗邻古老的天坛公园(北京的象征),风景优美,适合居住
成就:
2.经济发展迅速
3.修建了不少商场、住房、街道等
存在的问题:
4.噪音、空气污染
5.交通拥挤
对本区发展的看法:
自己拟定
注意:1.词数在100左右,信的开头已经给出
2.短文要包括以上所有要点
参考词汇:
经济economy(n.) 象征symbol(n.)
Dear Bob,
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful town.Now I'dlike to tell you something about my district.
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Dear Bob,It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful town.Now I'dlike to tell you something about my district.I'm living in a wonderful place,it located on the south of B...