We have two important clients visiting our GZ office tomorrow.Please make sure...这段英文写得好吗?

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We have two important clients visiting our GZ office tomorrow.Please make sure...这段英文写得好吗?
全句:We have two important clients visiting our GZ office tomorrow.Please make sure you maintain your work area to be neat and dress formally.Thank you for your supporting.
我不是要译成中文,我想知道写得怎么样?通不通?

There will be two important clients visiting our GZ office tomorrow...
better.