帮我检查一下这堆英文有没有语法错误
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帮我检查一下这堆英文有没有语法错误
I first read “DORABASE”（书名） in 2006.It was first cartoon about I have read.It was wonderful and I fell in love with it the first time I read it.We have some online communities on this cartoon and each of us likes it.
As to the love of "Dorabase"(我这句是想说：出于对dorabase的喜爱）,I often focus on the news about you and your works--"Dorabase".I konw you are very busy,but I hope you can find time to reply to me.Is it OK?If so,and that too thanks.Thank you.
这里有的单词重复很多遍，而且我英语不好，比如XXX改成XXX。
答
firstly 用副词it was the first cartoon (that)定从 i had read.还有 没有上下文 哪里来的we 可改为 many readers and i 最好改掉 xx had 过去时 likedas to 没有出于的意思 用out of 或者直接用 forbut i hope you...