请帮我看看这句英文对吗?
问题描述：
请帮我看看这句英文对吗?
Mr Wang is business trip in Beijing these days.If you want to reach him please call jenny.
中文是：
王先生这几天在北京出差,如果你想找他请电话jenny.
是否因该是：
Mr.Wang is on business trip in Beijing these days.
答
不对
Mr wang is on a(his) business trip in Beijing these days.If you want to contact him please call jenny.
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