写了篇英语作文（初四的,很短）,
问题描述：
写了篇英语作文（初四的,很短）,
A mudslide Zhouqu
On August 7th,2010,a disaster suddenly fell.there was 4 extra-large mudslide in Zhouqu.It hit lots of people and made more than 1000 people lost their lives.This disaster made many children became homeless.They lost their friends,schoolmates,families,teachers and homes.Luckily,there were millions of caring people tried their best to help the disaster area of people.
有没有语法错误什么的?
答
第二行应该是lose their lives become homeless ( make sb do sth)第三行是tring their best.people of the disaster area