改一句英语,改得更好,句子结构,语法,名句啥的,申请用
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改一句英语,改得更好,句子结构,语法,名句啥的,申请用
In addition,the advanced subjects,such as Bioinformatics and Network Security which are full of interest to me,lead me to a wider and professional technological domain also with more choices to me.
答
In addition,the advanced subjects,such as Bioinformatics and Network Security,are of great interest to me.They will lead me to a broader and more professional technological domain which provide more choices to me.