please corrot and enrich it(5)
please corrot and enrich it(5)
The other days,I lost wenquxing in the bus from zhuhai to fuzhou.I was asleep when the bus arrived fuzhou.The waoman lying next to seat called me.I hurrily cleard my things including my book ect.but ingoring wenquxing which followed 3 years.I got off the bus And took a taxi to leave.Suddently,I realized it after 5minutines.I asked the driver to swing the car.The bus had left when I got there.I didn't submit And decided to catch up it.I supposed the bus should get to nanzhan in the end,but I was wrong.At last,Not only lost wenquxing but also I had to pay more 20 yuan to driver.
Through this things,I knew doing everything attentive.Sometimes Detailss is up to your successtion Or failure nor your intelligence.
By the way,afterwards I purchased a new wenquxing which is more many functionals than old one.I think it is better to help my english level.As the saying be:Nothing so bad but might be a blessing.
The other days(day用单数),I lost（加my） Wenquxing(加个an electronic dictionary电子词典,补充说明一下) in（on） the bus from Zhuhai to Fuzhou(地名首字母要大写).I was asleep when the bus arrived（加个in） Fuzhou.The waoman(woman) lying next to seat(改为next to me) called me.I hurrily cleard my things including my book ect.But ingoring Wenquxing which followed(加me) 3 years.I got off the bus And took a taxi to leave(去掉to leave).Suddently,I realized it(that) after 5 minutines.I asked the driver to swing the car.The bus had left when I got there.I didn't submit And decided to catch up it（catch it up）.I supposed the bus should get to nanzhan(南站the southern station) in the end,but I was wrong.At last,Not only(加did) lost(改lose,加my) Wenquxing but also I had to pay more 20(改为20 more) yuan to（加the） driver.
Through this things,I knew doing everything attentive.Sometimes Detailss is up to your successtion Or failure nor your intelligence.
By the way,afterwards I purchased a new wenquxing which is more many functionals than old one.I think it is better to help my english level.As the saying be:Nothing so bad but might be a blessing.