Besides,do you mind if I tell you make a small mistake about grammar that needs to be corrected
问题描述：
Besides,do you mind if I tell you make a small mistake about grammar that needs to be corrected
我要意思和语法错误的地方！
答
另外,如果我告诉你你的语法有错需要改,你会介意么?
错误的话
if I tell后面加That做宾语从句的引导词.另外我感觉那个make应该改成过去时made比较好