大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢

大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢
To be honestI'm only able to write just a little English . I met Apretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,humorous appeared in her life.She deeply loved him soon,At any rate,we were lover at that time.my heart was smashed to pieces.,we broke up in the end .Flash by as quickly as a weaver's shuttle.I’ve alreadygone from a boy .into a man.Some day ,WhenI was waitting for the subway,I glanced at her on theopposite of the platform
At that moment,it called up my bittersweet memory .Although Fixing on each other, we seemed as if we had never seen before.Words couldn’t express my sorrow.just when I wondered wether she was well or not in these years,the subway came.
A word of goodbye, two of the world .