自己写的英文小短文,请帮忙改错,初学者
问题描述：
自己写的英文小短文,请帮忙改错,初学者
About lately (近况)
What have you been up to?
I have been busy lately,I have been preparing the PETS examination.It will be held on 14,Sep 2013.
I must go to work on the days and look after my baby on the nights.
I have just entered for an English class on the net-school.I want to learn English from start.
The other day,I suddenly felt my neck sick.I want to check to the hospital,but I was too busy,I am feeling better,I think maybe I need take some rest.
答
on the days不是你要表达的意思,可以用at daytime表达在白天的意思.同理,at nights会比 on the nights好些.enter for 一般表示参加什么比赛活动之类的,直接用enter就ok啦from start是从开始的意思,不知道您这里要表...