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There are so many best minds in our world,they all are heroes.However,the real hero in my heart is not the one who always succeed or who has made great achievement,but the one who has the strong will to go against the difficulty,to get out of depression,never give up,to become confident,and at last make his dream come true.
Harlan Sanders is such a man.
Harlan was a full loser in his first sixty-year life.Although he was always in a hurry,and he tried his best to do everything,he made no achievement in any aspect,and he got nothing.What was worse,his wife and daughter lived him.In his biggest depression,he even tried to kidnap a two-year-old girl,but he failed.Time flies!He didn’t know he was old until his government sent him sixty-five candles on his birthday cake.Harlan got so angry that he took the first Social Security check and use it to start a new business which is still quite prospering and whose name is known by Kentucky Fried Chicken all over the world.
I have a dream that I can own a big farm.I know it’s hard become realty,because it need a great deal of money.I believe that nothing can stopped you,if you put your heart in it.Never give up!You will succeed.