英语.帮忙看看这句话有没有语法错误The story was about a blind girl for being robbed and leave originally familiar road,through the fence in the unknown world,against the visual senses outside on a great adventure.

The 好像用this 再说故事是过去式的你用的很乱啊啊，都忘了

leave 应该改成left 表过去

for 改成of leave 改成left in 改成on

好像有语法错误，也看不懂什么意思。

最明显的就是时态上的问题.
改正过来的句子应该是这样的："The story was about a blind girl who had been robbed and left original familiar road,passed though the fence in the unknown world,against the visual senses outside on a great adventure."
“本故事是关于一个被抢劫了的盲人女孩,离开了原本熟悉的道路,通过了位置世界的围栏,对抗着一场伟大历险的外部视觉.”
由于原句中第一句的歧义,还可以这样理"The story was about a blind girl whose sight had been robbed." 本故事是关于一个被剥夺了视觉的盲女.
如果你有这句话的本来意思,可以拿出来参考一下,可以根据意思重新翻译出正确的英语句子.
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