大家帮忙看看我写的这句英语有没有错

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大家帮忙看看我写的这句英语有没有错
I am glad to hear that your company is recuiting people who are capable,I wish I can join your company and do as much contribution to your company as I can.It will be my honor to talk to you face to face and get a chance to know each other.Wishing to hear from you soon.

I am glad to hear that your company is employing some people people who are capable,I hope I can join in your company and do as much contribution to your company as I can.It will be my honor to talk with you face to face so we can get a chance to know each other.Wish to hear from you soon.