雅思作文求修改

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雅思作文求修改
somepeople think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want,while others believe governmentsshould tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource .Discuss both views andgive your own opinion.
我晕==字数限制 写的作文弄不上来--

你可以追问中回复作文,一段一段改谢啦 那天一郁闷就联系一个英国的解结帮忙改了 然后忘记上来看这个了== 想去加拿大读研 结果单项受限郁闷到死T。T