帮我看一下这些英语语法和表述有什么错误?
问题描述：
帮我看一下这些英语语法和表述有什么错误?
1 Vegetables contain a variety of vitamins,these vitamins are the essential to the maintain life.While the meat has fat which causes many disease.
2 The free time at noon is short,but in the evening we have enough time to prepare a excellent meal.
3 It will cause the stomach disease.People's body will lose the best chance to absorb the vitamins.
4 It looks fresh and clean,and it save your time.The environment of the Western fast food shop is good,and liked by children.
答
1.a variety of vitamins,these vitamins 重复 啰嗦 冗长.且 essential 形容词 直接be essential to即可.无需加the/ maintain动词.动词前不用the.且maintain再次不要修饰life修饰health更号.改为 Vegetables contain...