Mr.talbot says that he will invite all the executive offers to come to lunch after they finished the meeting这句话对不对呀?错的话帮

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Mr.talbot says that he will invite all the executive offers to come to lunch after they finished the meeting这句话对不对呀?错的话帮忙改正~并说明下~

offers大概是officers
然后they finisher 我觉得时态不对 而且累赘 去掉比较好
Mr.talbot says that he will invite all the executive officers to come to lunch after the meeting.