Falling in love with you is the happiest thing in my life. Every day i miss you . Perhaps in the future we cannot be together, but I will always treasure the happiness you give me . You will be in my heart forever. I love you,baby. 求找出这段话的错误之处,或者适当修改一下,使语言更富有文采

Falling in love with you is the happiest thing in my life. Every day i miss you . Perhaps in the future we cannot be together, but I will always treasure the happiness you give me . You will be in my heart forever. I love you,baby.
求找出这段话的错误之处,或者适当修改一下,使语言更富有文采