英语作文 I will go to Shanghai 急用!2012.12.12六点之前用将来式

I will go to Shanghai, I think Shanghai is a modern metropolis.I really want to have a look at the winter in Shanghai is what appearance, there will be snow gleams white. Scene?Shanghai is famous all over the world financial center of China, one of the four municipalities, and opened the world expo. I want to go to many places in Shanghai, such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, Expo Park, Binjiang Avenue, the city temple, the Bund, Tianzifang, Madame Tussaud's and so on... And I hope to have a good harvest. Shanghai, wait for me. 我将要去上海,我认为上海是一个现代化的大都市.我真想看看上海的冬天是什么样子的,会不会有白雪皑皑的景象呢?上海是世界闻名的金融中心,中国四个直辖市之一,又开过世博会.我想去上海的很多地方,比如东方明珠,世博园,滨江大道,老城隍庙,外滩,田子坊,杜莎夫人蜡像馆等等... 我希望此次去会有一个很好的收获. 上海,等我. 给满意吧.