看一看这篇英语短文有什么语法错误
问题描述：
看一看这篇英语短文有什么语法错误
Children's Day
Today was Children's Day.My classmates and I were very happy.In the afternoon,we had great fun playing in the classroom.We watched
a cartoon movie,Conan.It was really interesting.And we atemuch food.It was delicious.Then Mr He played a magic for us.It was very great.I really enjoyed it.
Today I was very happy and really relax.
答
还好吧,就是单句太多.可以用一些复杂的句子.Children's DayToday was Children's Day.My classmates and I were very happy.In the afternoon,we had great fun playing in the classroom.We watcheda cartoon movie...