短文改错 10处 I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterdayI went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday.When we finished shopping,my mother asked me I wanted anything else.I nod immediately as I remembered my good friends Wang Lin,whose mother died last year.He didn't have a coat.But I decided to buy one for he.I toldmy mom which I thought.She was very delighted and given me 200 yuan.With the money,I bought a black coat for Wang Lin.This moring,
短文改错 10处 I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday
I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday.When we finished shopping,my mother asked me I wanted anything else.I nod immediately as I remembered my good friends Wang Lin,whose mother died last year.He didn't have a coat.But I decided to buy one for he.I toldmy mom which I thought.She was very delighted and given me 200 yuan.With the money,I bought a black coat for Wang Lin.This moring,I wrapped the coat on Christmas paper and wrote"To Wang Lin,From Santa Claus" on it.I'm very happy that I could do anything for him.
I went shopping with my mom yesterday which was the Christmas day. When we finished shopping, my mother asked me if I want to buy anything else. I nodded immediately because I remembered Wang Lin who is my good friend, his mother died last year. He didn't even have a coat so that I decided to buy one for him. I told my mom what I thought about just now. She was very delighted and gave me 200 yuan. I took the money and bought a black coat for Wang Lin. On this morning, after i warpping the coat on a packing paper, I worte 'To Wang Lin. From Santa Claus' on it. I am very happy that I can actually do something to help him.
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I went to (1.去掉to) Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday.When we finished shopping,my mother asked me (2.此处加上if或whether) I wanted anything else.I nod (用一般过去时态nodded) immediately as I ...