帮忙看看一个英语句子写的对不对
问题描述：
帮忙看看一个英语句子写的对不对
对于平均年龄40岁以下的读者来说,他们几乎不可能对出现在许多大城市的报纸上的高品质艺术评论产生印象
It is difficult to the point of impossibility for the average reader under the age of forth to created some impressions of that high-quality arts criticism could be found in most big-city newspapers
这样写对么?感觉似乎有些问题
答
In terms of the readers whose average age are under 40,high quality art criticism appearing in many metropolitan newspapers can hardly leave any impressions in their mind.
个人认为这样写更合适