帮我找一下这篇英语作文的错误?
帮我找一下这篇英语作文的错误?
这篇文章是根据这个提示写成的：
Notes
Interview with Xu Zheng
Likes:taking notes/watching movies/ listening to pop songs
Finds difficult:pronunciation/native speakers talking too quickly
Learns by:making up conversations / speaking to friends in English
Thinks:most people speak English as a second language/ English is used around the world for computers/ English is often used in science/ English can help us understand many new books and movies
下为作文：
Xu zheng likes taking notes in calss,watch mivie in the cinema and listening to pop song during his free time.He find it is diffucult in pronuncing and hard to understand native speakers when they talk too quickly.He learn to speak in English with friends.He thinks most of the people speak english as a second english can help him understand more,for example he can understand more new books and movies after learning english.
1、watch mivie似乎应该是watching movie
2、he find改为he finds
3、pronuncing改为pronouncing
4、he learn to speak in english with friend似乎不通,改成he learns english by talking with his friends and making up conversations
5、从he thinks开始句意就不太明了了,建议改成：He believes that english is very useful because most people speak english as a second language and english is widely used in computers and science.And he can better understand many new books and movies.
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