短文改错 共十处 Dear Editor,​i'm a high school student and a English lover.

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短文改错 共十处 Dear Editor,​i'm a high school student and a English lover.
i'm a high school student and a English lover.i have been reading your magazine for only a few month,but i have already fallen in love with it.i want to learn english good.then i can use it talk with foreigners.speaking english like a foreigner are my dream.my favorite part of your magazine.i will keep read your magazine,so it's not easy to learn english very well.can you give him more suggestions?
yours,
Li Na

I'm a high school student and a(an) English lover.I have been reading your magazine for only a few month(months,复数),but I have already fallen in love with it.I want to learn English good(well,...