求一篇以 success comes from hard work为题的议论文
求一篇以 success comes from hard work为题的议论文
要求:150―200字,要有论点、论据、结论.不要使用状语从句,将状语从句用介词短语替换,替换的越多越好.
Success Comes From Hard Work
Hard work can make one succeed in doing things and a difficult exertion can train one’s will and make him develop rapidly;such examples are too numerous to list.
King Goujian of Yue kingdom underwent self-imposed hardships and constantly strive to become stronger so as to strengthen his resolve to back in the saddle. Sun Jin of Han Dynasty used to hang his hair from a beam when he was reading at night to prevent from falling asleep, which made him read extensively good many books and eventually became a famous great scholar. It does not come singly but in pairs that another ancient politician in the Warring States Period, named Su Qin, stuck his thigh with a drawing awl in order to exert himself to read deep into the night. Of course, he finally was appointed to the prime ministers of the six states.
All these prove that success comes from hard work. Therefore, once working hard, any of us is sure to be high up in the pictures.
论点:Hard work can make one succeed in doing things.
论据:to illustrate that a difficult exertion can train one’s will and make him develop rapidly:
King Goujian of Yue kingdom underwent self-imposed hardships
Sun Jin of Han Dynasty used to hang his hair from a beam when he was reading at night to prevent from falling asleep.
Su Qin stuck his thigh with a drawing awl
结论:As long as we working hard, any of us is sure to be high up in the pictures