请帮我看一下,这篇英语作文有么有错误
问题描述：
请帮我看一下,这篇英语作文有么有错误
Snow
Nature always gives people a present as snow every winter .Snow is white .It's very beautiful .It's always covers everything on land like dressing up in white clothes.So i love snow very much .In winter ,i can have fun with snow .I can make snowmen with my parents,go skiing and play snow ball games with my friends .There will be cold but i still like do them.I love winter because of the snow .I love snow because of its beauty!
第二行 第三个词 是 It 不是 It's ,我打错了
答
没有特别的错误,只是同句型的句子太多.
在汉语上可能叫做排比,但用在英语上不免有些牵强.
那个所有表达我的“I”都要大写哦..