短文改错.只许改10处.Today I attended in the English Corner had held in our school短文改错.只许改10处.Today I attended in the English Corner had held in our school.Many teachers,included some English teachers,went there.The Students' Union even invited Mr.Smith,a honored guest,to the English corner.He introduces some western customs and encouraged

Today I attended the English Corner which has held in our school. Many teachers, including some teachers of English, went there. The Students' Union even invited Mr. Smith,an honored guest,to the English corner. He introduced us some western custom and encouraged

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更正在括号处标明,总共十处错误,保证答案准确率!Today I attended (去掉in) the English corner.It was the first time that an English corner had (加入been) held in our school.Many teachers,(included改成incl...

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Today I attended (去掉in) the English corner. It was the first time that an English corner had (加入been) held in our school. Many teachers, (included改成including) some English teachers, went there. The students' union even invited Mr.Smith, (a改成an) honored guest, to the English corner. He (introduces改成introduced) some western customs and also encouraged us (student改成students) to learn to speak English freely. But when I had a chance to talk. I felt a bit (nervously改成nervous) and was at a loss (how改成what) to say. It took me some time to get used to (speak改成speaking) fluent English. I was determined to take part in (so改成such) wonderful activities as often as possible.