两个英语改错题,难一点的最好能给出解释

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两个英语改错题,难一点的最好能给出解释
I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you.I'm glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese.I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it tome.How time flies!Our friendship has lasted for several months.We have got to know but learnd a lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that your life in our country is quite different from me.Thanks again for writing to me.I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.Best wish to you and your family.
Many students feel that a popular teacher must kind and easy going.He and she should make the class very active for joking with the students.Howerver,the popular teacher is at same time the one who should be strict with students.Last year,my English teacher proved to be the more popular in our school.She was ysual patient with her students and never made them disappointed.She always stays in full control of the situations.She always made sure that our homework wasfinished on time,but she marked strictly on student's actual performance.
打得有点快可能会有拼写错误不计.
第二篇只有9个错误

I am excited to have accepted an e-mail from you.I'm glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail in good Chinese.I read your e-mail to my parents and showed them the photo you sent tome(?).How fast time flies!Our friendship has lasted for several months.We have got to know and learnd a lot from each other.Yes,it is clear that your life in our country is quite different from mine.Thanks again for writing to me.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes to you and your family.
Many students feel that a popular teacher must be kind and easy going.He or she should make the class very active by joking with the students.Howerver,the popular teacher is at the same time the one who should be strict with students.Last year,my English teacher was proved to be the most popular in our school.She was ysual(?) patient with her students and never made them disappointed.She always stayed in full control of the situations.She always made sure that our homework was finished on time(这两句的时态应保持一致,但是个人认为一般现在时更准确),and she marked strictly on students' actual performance.