今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,

今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,
nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.
I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Firstly,it is convenient for people to buy the goods and they don't need to go outside to seach the goods in shops one by one so that save their time.Secondly,the goods sells on the internet is cheaper than in shops,it can save their much money.However,shopping online can also be potentially dangerious.since the buyer and the seller do not need to deal with face-to-face,the quality of the goods can't be guaranteed,and the goods may be damaged during the delively.
From my piont of view ,shopping online is a trend and we should not be prohibited .But we should be careful while using it and the government should be take some measures make it perfect.
顺便帮我看一下这个作文的语法什么的问题,我英语基础不够好