英语作文在线点评
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英语作文在线点评
修改一下我的作文：My dream life
in the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?
答
happen everyday 改为：happy every day 每天很快乐（ everyday每日的）in my home,has a robort改为：There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in m...