帮忙看看这句话能不能这样改?

问题描述:

帮忙看看这句话能不能这样改?
He has a deep affection for his old friend.
改成
There is a deep affection of his for his old friend.
对么,如果不对的话该怎么改称there be句型?

首先 of sb 不要用所有格的形式
如题目中的of his 是不正确的
其次 这句话应该改为:
there is a deep affection form him to his friend.