i always love you.If you also have the same idea.i think that we could be BF&GF and spend the last 45days together.有语病么?

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i always love you.If you also have the same idea.i think that we could be BF&GF and spend the last 45days together.有语病么?

有语病,不过不严重.表达也不够地道,中文痕迹很重.不过对方英文水平不差的话,能够理解你的意思.能帮忙改一下吗?给好评的,拜托啦🙏I will always love you.We could be together and enjoy the last 45 days if you share the same idea with me.可能还比不上母语是英语的人的表达,不过还是要看你像谁说啦。能理解的。last 换成 rest比较好,强调剩下的日子。