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Nowadays it is more and more common to using animals for experimentation purpose,duing to the development of science.But it is in the light of an expectation someone think that it is cruel and opposed,others think it is the needs of society and supported,There is no denying that the two views both have the proper sides.
First of all,for some opposers,they feel that animals also have life and heart like people,When being sliced,they can feel being in pain,when being bad mood,no doubt,they also will put into worry and upset.However it is obvious that animals should take any respect from everybody.In the second place,to opposer themselves,possessing the belief and kindness is the most important reason why they are to feel cruel about animals experiment and have a desire to protect one’s life,such as bonze,follower of a religion and those who will be sad for a long time because of killing a small ant.Human appeal to peace and friend with animals,in a sense,banning animals experiment will be the first step to come out the measure.
For some supporters,on the hand,science technology have solved many problems,including about life of people and the whole society.While animals experiment contribute a great to science’s development.Through this way,we can not only help a lot of patients to renew health in advanced medicine,but also learn of the structure of our human body,which is benefit to research that how we live longer.It pays to sacrifice a few animals.On the other hand,It is universally acknowledged that advanced medicine is for helping and saving more people,to avoid occasionally unqualified product,so every production in using process must prove that it is considerable safe to body.An advantage of using animals of doing experiment is that it reduce dangerous rate of people.
In fact,as I see it I am as a supporter,animals is important in our life,therefor,on no account can we ignore it.While ,no doubt,we play an more important role in our life.Compared with us,animals only is a right hand ,but absolutely necessarily .